I'm actually a little hesitant to post this one for a few reasons....
First, it's pretty dark. I've done darker, but not by much and not often.
Second, I don't really like using Molly cast as the "bad guy", but the picture/expression just "fit", dammit :(
Third, I am NOT 100% thrilled with the writing. It was too much story for one panel, but I just didn't want to stretch it over two, so I forced it to fit, cutting some details.... Also, I switched POV's, something I generally try to avoid....
This one could easily bear a sequel, if there's ANY interest. I've got literally hundreds of Molly pics, and a few ideas on ways it could go, but it may be the "ick factor" is too high...
I'll take a page from Dee's book...
Discussion Question: Should this story continue, and if so, what direction would you like it to go?
Do you want the protagonist to blithely go on? Do you want the protagonist to "awaken" and feel overwhelmed? Or, do you want the protagonist to live "happily ever after", adjusting to her new life?
Inquiring minds want to know :) I'm heading off to bed, so I'll check what y'all said, if anything, in the morning :)
Without further ado, here is "Justice Served".
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